I like it..

Where is next PART???

LOL

nice revenge...
hahaha

I love the intro song and the music. The concept is brilliant and I like it. The only thing bother me is some of the action as mention earlier seems to be unethical, the game aren't long enough. It would be awesome if the game is longer where we found the culprit, not just ended like that.
You should continue the game. I'd looking forward next chapter and hope to see improvement.

Awesome game... I always love to play such themed game..
Perhaps you can try play Game Dev. Story by Kairosoft which is a mobile game with similar theme. It will be great if you can get some idea from that game like game genre system, game sequel, better award such as best game of the year and better system for rival competition.
But I do love what this game have but not in the kairosoft game.
It would be great if these two game combine and produce a prefect game developing themed game.

should get a better score

Amazing work.. but it seems the old one gains much more popularity than this one. Still, it should get a better score. ^^